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Morpho's avatar

So interesting— we seem to be tapping into the same streams… I wrote about Atlas yesterday… not a poem, just in a comment to a substacker seeking some physical attention. I recommended lying on the ground and feeling the warm weight of the world like mother earths embrace, in a pose like Atlas, but without the frustration and the frantic pace.

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Jeremy Beecher Phan's avatar

It’s lovely and thoughtful. It reminds me of ‘Atlas’ by U A Fanthorpe -

Atlas

There is a kind of love called maintenance,

Which stores the WD40 and knows when to use it;

Which checks the insurance, and doesn’t forget

The milkman; which remembers to plant bulbs;

Which answers letters; which knows the way

The money goes, which deals with dentists

And Road Fund Tax and meeting trains,

And postcards to the lonely; which upholds

The permanently rickety elaborate

Structures of living; which is Atlas.

And maintenance is the sensible side of love,

Which knows what time and weather are doing

To my brickwork; insulates my faulty wiring;

Laughs at my dryrotten jokes; remembers

My need for gloss and grouting; which keeps

My suspect edifice upright in the air,

As Atlas did the sky.

by U.A. Fanthorpe

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